This isn't the dawn of a new age it isn't the dawn of any age it's just an age and alike all ages it's between two ages which are themselves between two ages and ever anon
And in there you were born and that, it frames it for you and makes it have meaning
You should change it so that the age between your age and the age after that that is, the age you leave behind looks forward and back on your birth
And smiles and says, "thanks."